About Terna comic test

Okay, since I am considering to make a comic, I made this as some sort of test.
These are the first 2 pages for a little introduction of Terna... I think it will have 6 pages in total.

I kept it in a very simple style, so that I would not spend days on finishing one single page.
And although this coloring looks pretty flat, it is still very time consuming. If I ever make a longer comic, there may be only one or two colored pages per chapter.

If you find any mistakes in spelling or grammar, please point them out ^^

Hope you like it...