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I TellYouTheTruthRedraw sketch by Biali I TellYouTheTruthRedraw sketch by Biali
OOOkay. Here is the first sketch for the redraw of this picture

Thanks for voting again!

I'm quite content with the gaint, but the girl still looks a bit wierd... It is hard to not make her look cartoony at this size... I rellay could not get her face right yet :/

But I'm happy to see that I have improved quite a lot during the last year, especially when it comes to male faces :3

hope you like it... and please don't hesitate to leave some cirtique in the comments. If you see a mistake, point it out and I will try to avoid it in the final picture!
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:icondarthfeatherpants:
DarthFeatherpants May 1, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMG This is awesome :D
Seems like he looks a bit older this time.
I mostly like his face .. it has much charisma than the last pic. ^^
But the first pic was great too!!!
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:iconbiali:
thank you ^w^

I guess I just have some problems to draw younger looking guys in this style XD...
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:icondarthfeatherpants:
DarthFeatherpants May 2, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nono it it great. :D
Youre getting better. ^^
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:iconkindii:
Kindii Apr 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Your skills have changed so much since back then. I love it! 8D
As for critique, I don't see anything that needs changing.
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:iconbiali:
thank you ^w^
For the final version I just changed a bit of the girls' pose and her face.
I hope I can finish it soon ^^
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:iconrathskallion:
Rathskallion Apr 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
How'd I miss THIS? Good job, b!
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:iconbiali:
Oh thank you ^^ I'm glad you like it ^^
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:iconzen4life:
It certainly looks better than the first. The eyes are more accurate, for one, and there's a lot more detail present here. Nice work.
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:iconbiali:
thank you ^^ I'm glad that I could improve on this one ^^
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:icongiantblackcat:
Mmm... He looks great but... Looks like he's a perv -w-;; XDDD
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